a poem

[Snowwiewolf]

Sometime ago I got an idea for a poem. I thought I'd try and publish it on a site for young writers, I thought that they wouldn't publish it, but I tried.The poems in english and it's a finnish site.

My mom was just searching for another poem that I got published and found this one... which I had forgotten about:

My love

A crisp night air,
a cold breeze,
where have you been,
what have you seen?
On all your journeys
have gazed upon the one I loved?
Her eyes so green,
many envy with greed.
The curve on her face,
that smile makes me ache.
Her lips on mine,
a dance divine


Here's the first one I got published. I was listenign to Sonta Arctica's, Reconing Night so it's a bit scary:

My murder

I heard the grave dug.
Mine
I heard the clock cout moments.
My last ones
I heard the steps come closer.
My destiny
But I didint hear the dagger fall, towards....
My murder

[Madmogsue]

i had a poem published in the young writers poetry book, can't find the book at this point in time, was part of a class thing, and if you wanted to submit it you could, i thought no harm in it, so i did, and it got published... i found the book on the website of the company that published it, but it doesnt show you my poem... i have the book... just dont know where the bugger is... need to look the attic...